As I Curl Up With The Girl Beside


As I curl up with the girl beside,
Rays of sun spreading in the bed aside,
Having my face still buried deep inside,
I could feel the day dawning hillside.

As I feel her warmth wading in,
I hold her slender arms breathing in,
Wrapped around my neck, tugging in,
Lying awake hugging, as the day started sneaking in.

***

Night was when, our kisses grew passionate,
Burning the bleak hours of night annihilate,
The souls bewitchingly left to confabulate,
Left us writhingly discasing accentuate.

Lips were engaged in tender fights,
Harmlessly fighting for the other’s rights,
Till we reached astounding heights,
Seething in pain, savouring emotional delights.

***

More than warmth, the love is profound,
Now she is mine and everything around,
I in her and she in me, all the stound,
Love in us ends only when the sky hits the ground.

As the winter sets, comes the end of September,
Its time for me to wake up and burst the slumber,
I wish I hold her, feel her and breath her to an infinite number,
Making her my sweet, lovely and adorable wife coming-
Christmas after October, November in December.

PS: My 1st attempt to write a poetry! Excuse moi for any errors!!πŸ™‚
P.P.S: This is posted for a contest in my Office!

20 thoughts on “As I Curl Up With The Girl Beside

  1. Wow Kally! 1st attempt! Unbelievable!! It’s wonderful…πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚ Wish u to write many more such onesπŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

    contest frm FFC??? Hope u win!πŸ™‚ by the way, wat is the theme?

  2. Good one.

    Is it a rule of thumb that every line should rhyme?

    Just after you spoke about your passionate kiss the word ‘annihilate’ killed the spirit.

    //This is posted for a contest in my Office!
    Ok! One question. Are we allowed to date co-workers?
    U.S. Company dhana.?πŸ™‚
    Let me know if you get luckyπŸ˜‰
    ~ cheers..!

  3. @Priyanka: Thanks yaar….Haan FFC ke liye hai ye…

    Theme is WAKE me UP before SEPTEMBER ENDS. We should come up with some poetry relating to SEPTEMBER as it is nearing end (Contest posted in the last week of Sep).

    Theme can be anything – Humor, Love etc….and we shud use atleast one of the words in caps in the poem for sure. (You can see some words bolded in my poem)

  4. @Karthik: Thanks man…

    //Is it a rule of thumb that every line should rhyme?
    No dude..not necessarily!! I just wanted it that way…

    //Just after you spoke about your passionate kiss the word β€˜annihilate’ killed the spirit.
    Well,was just searching for some words rhyming to it…first time la there will be some up n downs…hehe!!πŸ˜€

    //Are we allowed to date co-workers?
    Daaii….y is this question in the 1st place???πŸ˜› well, to be honest, its a mutual acceptance…if the other side is also willing then y worry!! hehe…

    US company na apdi thirivaangala? enda company la yum try pannalaam da….!!πŸ™‚ its in the people not in the company!!!

  5. Hey Kalyan:

    Good attempt, I must say and that too without any experience of making anyone your wife!

    It was great connecting yesterday at Hyatt. Do keep in touch.

    Joy always,
    Susan

  6. @Susan

    Thanks a tonn…

    //I must say and that too without any experience of making anyone your wife!
    OMG!!! hehe…But I see people write poems in the process of making someone their wife!!πŸ˜‰ Once made, who gets time to write poems!!! Lols!

    //It was great connecting yesterday at Hyatt. Do keep in touch.
    Really!!! I had a great time and it was so much fun!!!

    Keep visiting!!

  7. Wen u write poems so well like the person u r in reality then u should not be asking for excuses..It was really nice to meet ya Kalyan and it was gud to be thr at the blogger’s meet for the first tym..
    try checking out my blog and commenting regularly..Would luv to hear ur views..Am following ya expecting u to return the favour someday!!
    http://www.headacheandtension.blogspot.com

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